Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Magpie Journey Begins

I open my eyes I see not a scene in position.
I look back in mirror I see tatterdemalion dreams, hopes and aspirations.
I close my eyes I see days ahead fulfilling those dreams unrealized and unceasing  jubilation.

written for mag 37

21 comments:

  1. Sometimes its better to just look forward rather than looking at the past and brooding over it.Expressed beautifully! :)

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  2. Simple and beautiful. Wonderful use of tatterdemalion!

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  3. Beautifully stated, yet simple. Very nice.

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  4. Jubilation, now that's a word that should be used more, in poetry & every day! Loved your Magpie!

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  5. Very well done..I could feel the intention to go on!!

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  6. cool sentiments,
    lovely tale.
    looking forward is a yea for all.

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  7. Wordplay here is lovely. Nice Mag. Love and Light, Sender

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  8. Love the way you expressed yourself.

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  9. dang wonderful use of words...ineed to look up tatterdamelion...that is really cool...keep looking forward...

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  10. sometimes we see most with eyes closed..really liked this

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  11. I, like Brian, learned a new word ... so much wonderful expression in not so many words. Poetically Perfect!

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  12. best to look ahead, rather than to focus on what's gone! :) lovely take..

    My Magpie is Here

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  13. Tatterdemalion is such a great word! Well done.

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  14. well written, crisp n yet n exhaustv description, loved it

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